Otters... In... SPACE
Mar. 29th, 2008 10:56 amOkay, I've got chapter 3 up. This one wasn't as hard to write, but it was harder to come up with, like, a sequence of events to write to, that left the people who are supposed to be competent still looking at least halfway competent.
...and it ends on a cliffhanger again, because the resolution I had in mind for the immediate situation didn't quite make sense, and I need to work out exactly what...certain people are going to do about... stuff. And it looks like that might be a whole chapter on its own.
No sex this time, but there's some nudity. I mean, from someone who doesn't walk around in the fur all the time.
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters3.html
(previous parts:)
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters2.html
...and it ends on a cliffhanger again, because the resolution I had in mind for the immediate situation didn't quite make sense, and I need to work out exactly what...certain people are going to do about... stuff. And it looks like that might be a whole chapter on its own.
No sex this time, but there's some nudity. I mean, from someone who doesn't walk around in the fur all the time.
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters3.html
(previous parts:)
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/spaceotters2.html