Glow Bugs 13

[terrycloth]

This was originally a very long chapter, most of it taken up by a really long, really really boring fight scene, where the enemies mostly stood around doing nothing for no good reason, and the obstacles faced by the glowbugs were difficult-to-follow and somewhat contrived tactical considerations relating to the falloff of repulsor strength vs. range.

So I took that part out, and put back in the theme that I'd started working with but forgotten about while writing up the big stupid battle scene. So now it's a really short chapter, but the horribleness seems to have been sucessfully removed.

Wait, that's another anti-teaser, isn't it...

IN THIS EPISODE OF GLOW BUGS, Era and the glowbugs decide to leave home at last, on a quest in search of ADVENTURE! But when Jink and Litany fall victim to a fiendish trap set by the nefarious Candy, can the rest of the party pull together to rescue them, or will the glowbugs' adventure degenerate into PVP?

http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug13.html

Previous chapters:
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug1.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug2.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug3.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug4.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug5.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug6.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug7.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug8.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug9.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug10.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug11.html
http://home.earthlink.net/~aaronm1/text/glowbug12.html

Glow Bugs is the sequel to Space Otters:
http://terrycloth.livejournal.com/540642.html