Space Captain Pinkie Pie

I'm not finished with it, but part of the point was to have an open-ended story that I could keep adding to, so finishing is kind of defeating the purpose. So I'm putting up what I've got up to the last point where I'm pretty sure I'm not going to get fed up and delete everything.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/19655/Space-Captain-Pinkie-Pie